How to Write Killer Bullet Points

Well-crafted bullet points make your copy more readable. And they allow you to do something else that is very important, as well. What is that something else? You’ll have to listen to the latest episode of The Lede to find out.

Keep your readers running down your page like water on a slide.”

Wouldn’t you like your copy to have that effect?

Of course. Who wouldn’t?

And while writing great sentences and using persuasive words are essential elements for making it happen, don’t overlook the importance of bullet points.

In this episode, Demian and I discuss:

  • The two primary functions of bullet points
  • Why bullet points are essential for readability
  • How bullet points can (and should) be used to tease and entice
  • What “bullet clutter” is … and how to avoid it.
  • Essential formatting guidelines
  • The importance of bullet point brevity (but what to do if your bullet points run on a little longer)
  • Why Mel Martin is a copywriter you should study

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The Show Notes

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The Transcript

Please note that this transcript has been lightly edited for clarity and grammar.

The Lede Podcast: How to Write Killer Bullet Points

Jerod Morris: Welcome back to The Lede, a podcast about content marketing by Copyblogger Media. I’m your host, Jerod Morris. If you want to get a content marketing education while you work out or while you’re driving to pick up the kids from school, this podcast is the way to do it.

In this episode, Demian Farnworth joins me to continue our series on the 11 essential ingredients of a blog post. And this is one that just may kill your content if you are not locked and loaded with your strategy. I’m speaking, of course, about bullets, and if you want to begin writing better bullet points today, keep listening.

Bullet points serve two primary functions:

  1. Make your copy easier to read
  2. Allow you to highlight specific copy points

But just because bullet points are simple, it doesn’t mean that they are simplistic or easy. There are a number of sophisticated ways to use bullets that make your copy killer. We’re going to discuss those today. And there are also a number of things that you want to keep in mind when it comes to formatting your bullets to make them seamless parts of your copy.

So Demian, let me kick it over to you. Why are bullet points absolutely necessary for online writing?

Demian Farnworth: Bullet points provide an avenue to break up text, and they’re essential for the readability part of online writing.

So you have a web page, and most people are going to skim and scan that copy. Bullets provide that opportunity that people can see something, and see something in a formatted point that’s staccato, that is short, and that is easy to scan and read. It provides an opportunity to highlight, stop the eye. Because people, if they like your headline, they’re going to hit your page, and probably read the first sentence, but before they do anything really, they’re probably going to scan it. And so bullets provide the opportunity to stop people and get them interested in what you’re writing. Same sort of idea behind subheadlines. Bullets provide a sort of landmark to stop people and get them to actually read what you’re writing.

Bullets are a great opportunity to entice and to tease people, and give them something, but not give away the farm. So for instance, I’ve seen this so many times through ads where they’re basically giving their product away. A bad bullet point is this bullet point where you kind of tell people, like, here’s the promise.

Robert Bruce talks about this in his Eight Quick Tips for Writing Bullet Points People Actually Want to Read. He talks about the two things that are essential: brevity and promise. Brevity is the part that it’s short. A long bullet point sort of defeats the purpose of doing the bullet point. But that doesn’t mean that it has to be two, three, four, or five words. It needs to be long enough so it’s readable, but it also needs to provide some sort of promise, and that’s the part we talked about, the tease.

And where I was going earlier, you’ll see people who write bad bullet points — where you make a promise and you tell people everything. For example, I wrote an article a couple of years ago called “The Dirty Little Secret to Seducing your Readers,” and I gave some examples of this book with a dust jacket that explains what someone needs to do to eat right, or a sales letter that unpacks the secret to raising brilliant children, and right in the letter they give away the sort of tips and the tactics, and then a video that demonstrates the best way to save money for your child’s college education, and then they give you all of the reasons or methods to do that, or a movie trailer that spills all the best lines, the funniest jokes, the most exciting plot twists. You’re not giving anybody anything to want. The problem is the reader doesn’t end up going any further. They don’t end up buying any of the products because they’ve been told everything.

So a good bullet point teases. For example, say you’re writing, and your readers — say they want to run a marathon in four hours, right? You would tell them you have a 17-week training program that will get them across the finish line in 3 and 1/2 hours, but will also prevent them from dehydrating, and allow them to recover in just one day with some little trick. But you don’t tell them what that trick is. Or, if your audience is dealing with crippling insecurity, you can tell them that you have a way to transform them to robust, productive human beings in seven days by thinking these three thoughts, but you don’t tell them what those three thoughts are. Say your audience wants to live to be a hundred. Then you might tell them that you’ve figured out exactly how to do just that with the right combination of exercise, food, and vitamins; but you don’t tell them what those exercise, foods, and vitamins are.

Jerod: So Demian, let me stop you really quick here, because what you’re describing, it sounds like, you really want to think of your bullet points like they’re headlines, like they’re all little mini-headlines. You talk about brevity and promise, and Robert even talks about that in his article, that obviously not every bullet point could also serve as the article’s headline, but if you think about them and infusing them with that “headline-ability,” then you’re going to be on the right track with your bullet points.

Demian: Exactly. Like I mentioned earlier, they are in essence sort of serving another function of getting to stop the reader again inside of the actual article, from the headline to the actual article. They serve the same purpose as subheadlines, the bullet points do, and so this is sort of related, too, to another topic that I’ve written about too, which is what we call these “internal cliffhangers.”

Which is nothing more than just … well, we know cliffhangers from episodic TV shows, right? Where they end the show with the hero, the heroine, in some sort of catastrophic event, and we’re not sure whether they’re going to die or not. Well, the internal cliffhanger is serving the same purpose but more subtly. It’s not as dramatic.

You see this, too, in books at the end of chapters. You know, novels. They’ll end the chapter with something dramatic happening, and you’re like, “What in the world is going to happen here?” But you can do the same thing with internal cliffhangers, and bullet points can serve that purpose too, where you sort of roll out some curiosity that makes people think, “Well, what’s going to happen next?”

Or you make a bold claim at the end of a paragraph that strikes people as audacious, and they’ll stick around to see if you can actually pull it off. You can even use humor, in which the jokes inside your knee-slapping posts are killing the readers and they want more, or you can use amazement in the sense of setting up some ridiculous scenario where your readers will wonder, “Is he or she really about to do what they suggest?”

So yeah, again, it’s the idea of the headline, of getting them interested to keep reading within the bullet point, within the copy, within the subheadlines.

How to format bullets (and avoid bullet clutter)

Jerod: Yeah. It’s not always just a list that you’re breaking apart; you really want to think about it strategically, and like you said, use as an internal cliffhanger. I think it’s also very important to make sure that you format your bullets correctly, and so let’s talk about that a little bit.

I know just from an editing standpoint, it’s one of the things that I really pay attention to, how bullet points are formatted. So for example, each bullet needs to be the same type, right? This is for the readability part of it. You don’t want to put a statistic on one line, a long explanation on the second bullet, and then the third one, kind of a random link. There’s no symmetry there. You really want to make your bullets symmetrical for the most part.

You also want to start them out the same way. If you’re using verbs, use the same tense of the verb. It’s really a stop-down place for a reader when they’re going down the bullets and you’re changing tenses, or you’re changing formats. Again, it’s about readability. Like Robert says, you want them just sliding down the page like they’re on a water slide. If your bullets are jagged at all, if there are those differences, you might stop them.

And then the other thing, you talked about brevity. And you do want to keep your bullets short. Sometimes you’re going to have longer bullet points, and I’ve seen it work where a bullet point is a longer sentence, or even two or three sentences if they don’t go on forever. But if you’re going to do that, think about your reader. And one way to make a longer bullet point work is to almost give the bullet point a headline, a 2, 3, 4-word little headline at the beginning that you put in bold, and maybe use a colon, or a dash, and then put the rest of it out there. So again, it adds another layer of breaking it up, and you can even scan the bullet points. So if you are going to use long ones, think about that to keep the readability there.

Do you have any other specific formatting tips like that that help?

Demian: Yeah, I think it’s important to realize that bullets, like headlines, aren’t necessarily sentences. So you can use fragments, and that’s sort of what you were getting at with the verbs.

But you know, you need avoid sort of bullet clutter at all cost. That’s this idea of where you have sort of subtitles, and then bullets, and then sub-bullets. So there’s this kind of cascading effect that goes on there. That doesn’t really work. It sort of defeats the purpose. So stay away from those sort of things.

Jerod: I like that term “bullet clutter.” I’m going to start using that.

Demian: Yeah, right.

One tip to improve your bullet points today

Jerod: That’s a good one. Okay, so let me ask you this, Demian, as we close up this episode of The Lede. If you were going to leave everybody with one tip, and obviously we’re going to put the links to Brian and Robert’s articles in the show notes, because those are must-reads when it comes to bullets. What other specific tips would you give to the listeners that they can use to make them better at writing bullet points today?

Demian: I think what they should do is go out and look up a guy named Mel Martin. He was a copywriter who is probably one of the greatest copywriters that nobody knows about. But he basically put his name on the marketing map through bullets.

His copy is unbelievably powerful. It’s unbelievably persuasive. His trick, though, was not just bullets. His trick was that he went for maximum anxiety. Going for the emotional jugular. Look at some of the stuff that he wrote.

He would write stuff like:

  • “What never, ever to eat on an airplane: The dirtiest, deadliest airline in the whole world”
  • “How to get VIP treatment in hospitals (all patients are not treated equally)”
  • “Cruise ship rapes: The uncensored facts which even the news media won’t touch”
  • “How to find out if someone has a past criminal record, bankruptcy, or whatever they’re hiding”
  • “The little-known casinos in Atlantic City and Nevada that offer the best odds”
  • “Deduct the cost of your hobby as a business expense even if you never show a profit.”

So this idea of kind of getting into our subconscious and bringing that out with these sort of fearful scenarios that excite the reader. So find him. His ads are all over the internet, just look up Mel Martin copy writer. And study his ads.

Jerod: And that fits in with the theme of this show and what we teach at Copyblogger, which is study what’s come before, because there are age-old tips and guys who have been doing it long before us that could have really paved the way. And we’ll put a couple of links in the show notes as well.

Thank you for listening to this episode of The Lede. If you enjoyed this episode, please consider giving us a rating or a review on ITunes. You can also e-mail the link to a friend or tweet about the show. We would greatly appreciate it.

Also don’t forget to listen to New Rainmaker. Brian Clark and Robert Bruce are re-defining what a business podcast can be. Either search for “New Rainmaker” in ITunes, or go to You don’t want to miss it.

The next time Demian and I get together, we’ll be discussing another topic that is essential for the readability of your blog posts: Subheads. There is no excuse for your subheads being anything less than exquisite, and we’ll tell you how to make them that way.

*Credits: Both the intro (“Bridge to Nowhere” by Sam Roberts Band) and outro songs (“Down in the Valley” by The Head and the Heart) are graciously provided by express written consent from the rights owners.


  1. says

    Anyone who remembers Mel Martin and knows his work knows what good bullet writing is. Parris Lampropoulos has a formula: the bullet should reveal the pain but not the identity of the solution.


    Apples cure this common disease (reveals solution but not pain)


    This delicious fruit found in the supermarket may cure cancer (reveals pain but not solution)

    • says

      This is a very instructive point, Bob. Thanks for taking the time to post it. It’s all about the pain, and those of us who are fond solving and fixing have a natural aversion to agitating pain. But that is what good copy does, it agitates pain. Bullet points can (and should) be used effectively as sharp, pointed pin-pricks. Your comment makes this point. Sorry for the pun.

    • says

      Hahaha… Absolutely Bob… You have a perfect example out there… infact i am also bad at writing attractive bullet points but your one is amazing.. 😉

    • says

      Thanks Bob. Definitely applicable to subject lines for emails as well. You don’t want to give a question that can be answered in a glimpse so that they don’t need to click open!

  2. says

    “Bullets are a great opportunity to entice and to tease people, and give them something, but not give away the farm.”

    Spot-on, guys! I agree that bulleted points entice a reader to read more, but it’s so important not to overdo it. When I see your examples of bulleted clutter on other blogs, I often think, “Did you guys even try to write a post?”

    Just thought you made some excellent points here, guys! Thanks for sharing!

  3. says

    Jerod and Demian

    Following on from what you said about highlighting parts of your list items in bold, let’s not forget that we use other visual enhancements to bring our bullets points to life.

    For example:

    – We can use tick points or check marks instead of plain bullets. These convey the idea that we’re fulfilling certain (purchasing) criteria.

    – We can use arrows. These are great for commands and instructions as they convey a sense of action.

    – We can experiment with spacial arrangement and colour.

    And lots, lots more …

  4. says

    Jerod, the mini headline approach vibes with me. Smart post. I scan, and read, and bullet points help me flow through articles quickly to take out vital information. Appeal to the microwave culture; use bullet points. Deliver content quickly and easily. Thanks!

  5. says

    Brilliant guys!

    Bullet points have long been a favourite way of mine for presenting key information to my visitors – I simply don’t believe there is a better way of delivering a message, except maybe clever imagery.

  6. says

    Interesting read Jerod:) I realize your article is universal. I’m focused everyday on sales page content.

    My Takeaway: Do a A/B test. #Measure the conversion results of bullet points describing benefits vs. problems. See if by describing problems (pain), leads to more scrolling by the reader (potential customer).

    Does it reduce bounce rate? Which will convert (Submit Button) more?

    Jerod’s Takeaway (lol): I followed you on Twitter, bookmarked your content, retweeted your content with an endorsement to like-minded people, and posted a comment on your page. Let’s see what happens:)

  7. says

    What a fantastic piece…I have lived in the world of “fascinations” my entire career and those “bullets” have paid a lot of bills for Boardroom/Bottom Line…and sold millions of subscriptions and books.

    Gene Schwartz used to send us “fascinations he’d LIKE to write about” (i.e. specific health ailments and concerns that he knew would vibrate off the page)…and then it was the job of our editors to “find the article to support the fascination.”

    How’s that for writing copy before you know what the product is? It was all about the fasciantions.

    And yes–Parris Lampropolous teaches “writing fascinations” way before he teaches “writing copy”…they are different.

    When you master the former, you are much further along to becoming a writer as amazing as…well…Gene Schwartz or Parris!

    By the way…shameless plug…I am hosting a three day event in September called “The Titans of Direct Response” (Sonia knows about this already)…speakers already confirmed are Dan Kennedy (not a bad fascination writer himself!), Ken McCarthy and Jay Abraham.

    And we will have a session called the “Mount Rushmore of Boardroom Copywriters” and Parris–along with David Deutsch, Arthur Johnson and Eric Betuel–will talk about their best promos for us and others–and a swipe file for all.

    Do you think the topic of “Bullet Points” might come up? :-)

  8. says

    I love these podcasts – super job. [Thanks to all involved!].

    The voices add a human touch to the people I usually only see (a headshot of).

    The length and format of the podcasts are perfect. Allows me to multi-task with ears peaked for the golden nuggets – because it’s guaranteed to contain them. Talking of which, BOB BLY’s right/wrong example in the Comments section is definitely golden.

    Note: Having given up on iTunes, unable to rate/review your podcasts :-[ (I’ve done no evil and went for Google Play).

  9. says

    Rightly said Jerode!

    A perfect blend of time and ingredients makes any dish Super-Hit. Same is the case with a write-up. Use of bullets capacitates viewers to understand the gist of the content in a simplest way possible.

    Thanks for sharing such a useful information and inclusion of the podcast.

  10. says

    Jerod–your piece obviosuly created an awesome thread–thanks again. And those “ridiculously entertaining and educational three days” will be September 11-13 in Stamford, Connecticut. I’ll send more information when everything is finalized…reading this thread on “Bullet Points” got me even more excited.

    There are days I wish I was a copywriter…:-)

  11. Brian Wright says

    Always interesting, thanks a lot guys.

    After listening to this episode I remembered that in your landing pages, your bullets use visual aids (red checkmarks) instead of the normal “circle” bullets. Can you talk a little more why is this so?

    Would you recommend them to emphasise certain information? Would you use both styles in the same page?


  12. says

    Thanks for the great contribution, Jerod Morris. Writing up a Killer Bullet Points is always beneficial in attracting new readers to our site. Moreover there’s some Powerful words like “Bang”, “Attention”, “Warning”, “Stop”, etc. which quickly grab the attention towards the post. Yet, I would really thank for such article.

    Thanks and Have a Great Weekend,

    – Bishal Biswas

  13. says

    The emotional jugular. Such a simply idea but so many of us trying to attract readers focus on stuffing in rubbish keywords than just awesome attention grabbing, emotional headlines. Great article.

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