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074 How to Get Massive Attention with a ‘High-Concept Pitch’

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074 How to Get Massive Attention with a ‘High-Concept Pitch’

There’s an old-school trick to selling ideas to movie executives. It’s called the high-concept pitch.

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A high-concept pitch lays out the entire story–premise, promise, and execution–in one simple sentence. Here are a few famous examples from Hollywood:

– Backdraft: Top Gun in a Firehouse
– Ghost: a man dies and becomes his wife’s guardian angel
– Liar Liar: a lawyer is forced to tell the truth for 24 hours
– Hook: What if Peter Pan Grew Up?

There’s a number of things that high-pitch concepts do but one of the main things is it brings together two completely different ideas and then demonstrates in the short pitch why your idea is different from others.

The applications for writers are endless. And the attention they can garner can be massive.

In this 10-minute episode you’ll discover:

  • How to develop a spooky-good original premise
  • Ways to twist traditional ideas to create stunningly new ones
  • How to widen the scope of a high-concept pitch to attract the largest audience possible
  • What can happen when you merge completely different ideas
  • The two-word question that promises great high-concept pitches

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How to Get Massive Attention with a ‘High-Concept Pitch’

Voiceover: This is Rainmaker.FM, the digital marketing podcast network. It’s built on the Rainmaker Platform, which empowers you to build your own digital marketing and sales platform. Start your free 14-day trial at RainmakerPlatform.com.

Demian Farnworth: Howdy, and welcome back to another episode of Rough Draft, your daily dose of essential web writing advice. I am Demian Farnworth, your host, your muse, your digital recluse, and the Chief Content Writer for Copyblogger Media.

And thank you for sharing the next few minutes of your life with me.

Let me mess with your head for a moment.

Pretend David Ogilvy is still alive. He still drinks scotch. He’s still feisty, flamboyant and lives in New York.

Let’s say he walks into a bar and sits down. He orders a scotch and waits.

The bartender asks him who he’s waiting for and he says, “Nobody. I’m taking a break.”

“A break from what?”

“From writing an ad.”

The bartender nods, polishes a glass and turns to put the glass away.

When the bartender turns back around there’s another man.

The stranger is nearly bald but what hair he does have is thick and white. Rimless, paper-thin glasses sit on the bridge of his nose.

The stranger orders a drink.

“I didn’t expect to see you here,” Ogilvy says, sipping scotch.

“Well, it’s that time of the year again.”

“Has it been that long?”

“Yes,” Nielsen says, pulling out a photo and showing it to Ogilvy.

“Cute baby. Who’s is it?”

Nielsen says: “Ours. His name is Demian Farnworth.”

Where I’m going with this.

The High-Concept Pitch

There’s an old-school trick to selling ideas to movie executives. It’s called the high-concept pitch.

A high-concept pitch lays out the entire story–premise, promise and execution–in a simple sentence. Here are a few famous examples:

Backdraft: Top Gun in a Firehouse
Ghost: A man dies and becomes his wife’s guardian angel
Liar Liar: A lawyer is forced to tell the truth for 24 hours
Hook: What if Peter Pan Grew Up?

What Does a High-Pitch Concept Do?

There’s a number of things that high-pitch concepts do but one of the main things is it brings together two completely different ideas and then demonstrates in the short pitch why your idea is different from others.

The world of the web is flush with web writers.

So to demonstrate how I differ from the pack I package it this way: “I’m David Ogilvy and Jakob Nielsen’s bastard son.”

Of course that needs some unpacking [which I’ll explain in a minute.] But it’s bold. Different. And gets people’s attention.

Isn’t that what you want to do with the things you write online?

When it comes to getting attention, out the window are the flatteries. In the trash are any complicated, detailed plans. You need to go straight for the throat. You need to pull no punches.

And you need to sell your idea so it sinks them right in the gut. In an instant. The same is true for writing web copy. You need to round-up and compress into a tiny amount of space a ridiculously compelling idea.

Because the space isn’t getting any smaller.

Your headline, tweet, subject line or blog tagline–they are one among a billion.

People do not know you and don’t want to know you unless you give them a good reason.

And getting people there isn’t enough.

5 Ways to Get People to Give Your Site a Second Look

You’ve got to woo them once they’ve found your site. You’ve got to get them to do that second look. Here’s 5 ways to do just that with the high-pitch concept.

1. Original Premise

Originality counts for everything. The plot line for The Sixth Sense is a good example: “A boy is working with a psychiatrist because he can ‘see dead people’ and it turns out his psychiatrist is a ghost.”

But you really don’t have to work that hard. Pulling from previous ideas and adding a little bit of a twist is also a fantastic way to write compelling headlines and seductive email subject lines.

2. Twist the Traditional

Take your favorite story, movie or ad and put a unique spin on it.

Hamlet in a trailer park. Texas Lullaby.

In the ad business, just about everyone has used and abused John Caple’s famous “They laughed when I sat down at the piano, but when I started to play!” or Max Sackheim’s “Do You Make These Mistakes In English?” as a template to write a headline.

Pillage the bank of past creative work, warp it to work for you and watch the response.

3. Massive Audience Attention

It’s important that you don’t forget about your audience. Know who you are speaking to.

What are they reading? Watching? Listening to? Can you tap into their preferences? Their fears?

Scan magazine racks. Read wide.

When you’ve landed on that fabulous idea, the next question you have to ask yourself is this: will this attract a wide or narrow audience?

If narrow, work on your idea until you can widen it’s scope. Once it’s as wide as you can get it, promote it.

4. Merge Opposites

A great approach to writing high-pitch concepts and stunning headlines is simply to combine two different ideas.

Imagine a scenario where someone undergoes a procedure that erases memories from his mind. Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind.

A happy man discovers his life is a complete fake. The Truman Show. Or David Ogilvy and Jakob Nielsen meet. And have a baby.

That’s opposite. Stunning. Frightening. And intriguing.

5. Ask “What If” Questions

Finally, this is the exercise that brings it all together. It’s a fabulous way to help any email, blog post or story take on a unique perspective. Take your idea and start asking “What if?”

What if a commercial jet crashed on a remote island in the South Pacific and the survivors tried to cope? Lost.

What if a cowardly opportunist is the member of a British family dynasty present at many significant periods and places in British history? Blackadder.

What if a sarcastic comedian puts movie stars in the hot seat on a cheesy stage? Zach Galifianakis’ Between Two Ferns.

You’d have someone with the ability to write seductive stories within the boundaries of good usability and search practices. In other words, you’d have some uniquely suited to overcome the two almost-insurmountable problems web content faces: obscurity and neglect.

When I say obscurity, I mean web content is buried beneath billions of web pages.

By neglect, I mean if someone actually finds your page, they’ll more than likely to ignore it or abandon it.

So how do you overcome these two problems? Obscurity and neglect. You have to write web content that search engines can’t resist and people love.

But here’s the thing. As I mentioned in the last post. Google won’t love you, until your readers love you.

Until next time. Take care.

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